proofed column

James asked, on the 9th, to review my Journal column draft, and respond before the 13th.

But Chris had my latest images. In his iPhone. In Richmond Hill. And he was at the CAO over the weekend. So I nudged Chris early Monday morning... A tad late.

I noted the wrong image was used for Figure 3. Sent it again.

And I provided an updated image for Figure 1.

Finally, I reworded some text in the Bits and Bytes section to be past tense.